Today we gained verbal and written feedback on our script for the news section of The Games Corner, Episode One. We provided the presenter of the show, Vicky Kilby, with a series of prompt questions to help her tailor her response to regard elements of the script that are most successful, elements that are less successful and suggestions of improvements.
"Strengths:
- Is presented well.
- Is easy enough for presenters to read and sounds relaxed.
Weaknesses:
- Is a little too bulky - Don't want viewers to turn off!
- Is straying a little from gaming into tech (Try to involve local news/indie games for future ref).
Overall:
I think that it is good, just be careful about straying too much away from gaming, for example you could cover indie games that are in development - I know of a few that are in Sheffield, cover future events that are in the UK i.e. Minecon, tournaments etc. Also be careful not to put in too much information - this is easily done but it could ultimately put a viewer off, try to make it not too serious and try to make it entertaining without being too cheesy!"
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