LO4: Task 1: Script Feedback from Vicky Kilby

Today we gained verbal and written feedback on our script for the news section of The Games Corner, Episode One. We provided the presenter of the show, Vicky Kilby, with a series of prompt questions to help her tailor her response to regard elements of the script that are most successful, elements that are less successful and suggestions of improvements. 

"Strengths:

- Is presented well.

- Is easy enough for presenters to read and sounds relaxed.

Weaknesses:

- Is a little too bulky - Don't want viewers to turn off!

- Is straying a little from gaming into tech (Try to involve local news/indie games for future ref).

Overall:

I think that it is good, just be careful about straying too much away from gaming, for example you could cover indie games that are in development - I know of a few that are in Sheffield, cover future events that are in the UK i.e. Minecon, tournaments etc. Also be careful not to put in too much information - this is easily done but it could ultimately put a viewer off, try to make it not too serious and try to make it entertaining without being too cheesy!"